广州市中考英语作文专
题复习饮食健康
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2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（七）饮食健康
一、相关话题
饮食（Food and drinks）、卫生与健康（Hygiene and health） 二、与专题相关的知识准备： 1.相关单元：
九年级上Unit 6 Healthy diet； 2.相关词汇：
高频词：menu, bread, milk, noodles, rice, potatoes, beef, vegetables, fruit, grains, restaurant, hamburger, cola, healthy, unhealthy, waiter, traditional, service, knife, fork, contain, dish,
高频短语：restaurant review, order food, have dinner, fried food, stay away from, a glass of lemon tea, soft drinks, lose weight, medical examination, plenty of, treatoneselfto…, coffee with milk and sugar, chicken wings, different kinds of…, change one’s diet, fast food, be good for, be bad for;
拓展词及词语：protein, dairy products, eating habits, serve…food, recommend, regular
3.经典句型：
I have bread and eggs for breakfast. It’snecessary to have a balanced diet.
You should/ ought to…/ You’d better…/ Why not… We should…instead of… Some people think that… If you…, you will… …can help you…
It’s +adi.+for sb+to do Here is some advice.
Try to order dishes with vegetables and low-fat meats.
4.参考谚语
1) An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。 2) Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。 3) Health is happiness.健康就是幸福。
4) He who has health has hope.留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。
三、经典例题(2012年广州中考题)
你是学校英文报的小记者李华。请给你校初三学生写一封公开信，就如何保持考前健康提出建议。主要内容如下：
（1）早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；（2）饮食均衡，少吃垃圾食品； （3）多做体育运动； （4）你的其他建议。 注意：
1.词数80左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear students,
As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams, soI‘m writing to…______________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes and stay healthy. Yours, Lihua
1、审题： 本文共有4 个要点 时态涉及一般现在时 人称是____第一人称_____
2、抓要点
(我们)早睡早起和保持充足的睡眠（We should…sleep early and get up early; haveenough sleep;）
(我们)饮食均衡( balanced diet);
(我们)少吃垃圾食品( have less junk food) (我们)多做体育运动( do more exercise) 3、连词成句
主要使用句型1,2,5,8,9 12, 使用谚语2，3
4、连句成文与修改评分 学生作文： Dear students,
As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams, soI’mwriting to students who isstudyingin grade nine.Firstly,weshouldsleep and get up early, andit’simportant to have enough sleep.Secondly, we should balance our
diet,don’teat too manydim-sum.Thirdly, ding much exercise is veryimportant.wecan play basketball and badminton after school. Lastly, we canlisten tomusic when we feel tired.Itcan relax ourselves. Best wish and stay healthy. 点评：
整篇文章行文流畅，调理清晰，并且对要点的描述到位，但是有拼写和简单的语法错误。要点拓展也可适当补充例子，尝试运用不同句子的表达。
5.检查思路： 完成作文自查表：
1.如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。
2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。 项目 第一次自查 第二次自查
布局与内容要点 人称 时态、主谓一致 动词搭配、介词搭配 拼写错误 好词好句 分项分档评分表 项目 要素 给分表 6-5．5 6 5— 2 1 0 内容: 切合题意，体现要点 6分 有所发挥 语 法 词 汇 机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误 流畅性:3分 结构 准确性:6分 5— 2 1 0 1 0 0 0 0 自评总分：______12_________ (满分=6+6+3=15)
6.参考例文： Dear students,
As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams,
soI’mwritingto tellyouthatduringthis period of time you need to get up early and go to bed early to ensure enough sleep. As a saying goes“you are what you eat”,Isuggest you have a balanced diet andavoideating junk food these
days.Although your will be very busy,Istill suggest you make some time to play some sports to helpyourselferrelax. Also, you can do other things to reduce stress, like listening to music and reading some interesting books. Best wishes and stay healthy.
Yours, Li Hua
三、练习：
适当的饮食习惯是健康成长的保证。请你以Good Eating Habits, Good Health为题,并根据下表提示（可适当补充内容），用英语写一篇不少于80个词的作文谈谈你的看法（开通已经给出，字数不计算在内）
Good Eating Habits, Good Health 不良习惯 良好习惯 个人看法
注意：1.词数80-100个
2.文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名 3.可适当发挥。
解题思路： 1、审题： a.本文共有个要点 b.时态主要采用 c.人称是_________
2、可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3、可能用到的句型
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
不吃早餐；爱吃零食；偏食，饮食过量 饮食多样化；饮食定时定量 良好发热饮食习惯有助于身体健康 ……..
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4、成文：
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 检查思路： 完成作文自查表：
1.如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。
2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。
项目 内容要点 人称 时态、主谓一致 动词搭配、介词搭配 拼写错误 好词好句 参考例文：
“Good Eating Habitslead toGood Health.”So it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.However, many students still have bad eating habits.Somego to school without breakfast; some like to eat snacks all thetime; somealways like to thesamefood;andstill some eat or drink too much.All these habits are bad for our health.
第一次自查 第二次自查
To keep fit, we should eat all kindsoffoods. Such asrice, fish, meat, vegetables and fruit.Besides, we’d better have meals at the right time.
In myopinion,we should develop healthy eating habits to make ourselvesstronger.