板块一--例文欣赏(人与鲨鱼)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha.One day they saw a big fishing boat.It was moving fast.
“Hello!” they shouted.The men on the boat looked at them angrily.Max looked carefully at the boat.
“Something’s wrong with their fishing net,” he said.They got nearer to the net. “What’s that?” said Tonya.“There is something in the net.It’s alive.” Very slowly they moved nearer.
“I can see it now,” said Tonya.“It’s a killer whale—it’s hurt.There’s blood in the water.How can we help it?”
“I can see it too.It’s a baby but we must be careful,” said Max. Jack jumped into the water.“I can get the net off its fin,” he said.
Jack got the net off the baby killer whale.There was a big cut on its fin.It swam away.Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.
“Jack!” Tonya shouted.“Get in quickly.” Jack swam to the boat as fast as a fish.“That baby killer whale...I am going to call it Lucky,” he said.
As they moved away,it began to rain harder and harder.
Jack said,“We must get away from the wind.I can see a town over there.Let’s go.” The town got nearer but the waves got bigger.Suddenly a very big wave hit the boat. “Is everyone OK?” shouted Jack.
“Tonya?...She’s not in the boat,” said Sasha.“She’s in the water.”
They looked into the cold,dark water for hours.“Tonya! Say something,Tonya.Where are you?” shouted Max.
The wind got stronger and the boat was full of water.Another big wave hit the boat.
“Jack,do you want us all to die?” said Max.“We can’t do any more.Tonya is wearing a lifejacket and she can swim very well.Let’s sail to the town.”
Moments later the boat hit a beach.They went out.Max and Sasha slept on the beach.Jack sat near the water,looking at the sea and thinking about Tonya. Paragraph 1:
At that time,Tonya was five hundred meters away out in the sea. Paragraph 2:
Jack was walking along the beach and suddenly he 1
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At that time,Tonya was five hundred meters away out in the sea.A big wave came onto her,making her sink into the water.She struggled to come up from under the water,only to find her lifejacket gone.“Help! Anyone help!” She shouted at the top of her voice but heard nothing in response except the roaring waves.All of a sudden,she caught sight of a giant dark fishlike creature moving swiftly towards her.“A shark!” Tonya froze.“I will be killed!” The next moment,another big wave hit her heavily.
Jack was walking along the beach and suddenly he spotted something like a tiny boat moving towards the beach.“Maybe someone has picked up Tonya!” He’s expecting something nice to happen.“Oh,no,it wasn’t a boat.It is Lucky—the injured killer whale we have rescued!” “Why is it here?” Before Jack figured out what was happening,another killer whale came out of nowhere,holding up a person high in the air! “ It’s Tonya!”
板块二--能力提升练习
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
There were four friends named Mahesh,Ramesh,Rakesh and Mohan.They belonged to the same village.Once they were invited to attend a marriage party in a distant village.Therefore,they decided to attend it together.
On the day of the marriage,the four friends started their journey early in the morning so that they could cross the forest before darkness fell.
While they were crossing the forest cautiously,they could not enjoy its beauty because they were afraid of the wild animals.That’s why they wanted to cross the forest speedily.
By noon,they had finished more than half the way.All of a sudden,Mahesh asked Ramesh,Rakesh and Mohan to stop and said,“There may be danger ahead as the area is known for its tigers.Let’s check for the tigers first,then we will go on further.” They all looked here and there.At that moment,Mohan saw the tail of a tiger behind the bushes.He trembled with fear and cried,“There is a tiger behind the bushes!Now,what do we do?How can we save our lives?” Mahesh said,“Do not be afraid of the tiger.Have faith in God.We should pray to God.He will protect us.”
Ramesh climbed up a tree and said to his friends,“Do not waste time in talking.Quickly,climb up a tree.God helps those who help themselves.Be quick.Save yourself.” So Mahesh,
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Rakesh and Mohan rushed to a nearby tree and climbed up.They held the trees firmly and nervously and all waited for the tiger to go.A few minutes later,the tiger stood up slowly,looking around.When the tiger went away,they went down from the tree.Thus,they crossed the forest safely and reached the village to attend the marriage party. Paragraph 1:
After the marriage party,they went back home together. _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________
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At this time,the tiger rushed them. _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________
一、故事梗概
朋友四人应邀到一个遥远的村庄参加婚礼担心碰到老虎,四人早早出发
故事梗概老虎出现,朋友四人都爬到了树上避难
老虎走后,朋友四人安全走出森林去参加婚礼二、情节推断
根据已给出的续写部分每段的开头语并展开合理想象可推断:
1.第一段应主要描述他们参加完婚礼之后回家途中的事情,其中应包括他们的心理活动; 2.第二段应该根据首句提示进一步描述他们和老虎作斗争的具体场景。
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可根据自己的想象构建故事情节。续写两段的四要素见下表:
Paragraph 1 时间:after the marriage party 地点:the forest 人物:the tiger,four friends Paragraph 2 时间:at this time 地点:the forest 人物:the tiger,four friends had no time to climb the tree,escaped,事件:arrived in the forest,saw a big 事件:tiger following them
三、要素串联
将已确定的四要素串联,并增加细节描写,完成读后续写。 参考范文
After the marriage party,they went back home together.When they arrived in the forest,they thought they might meet the tiger.They were frightened again,especially Mahesh.However,when they almost finished going through the forest,they didn’t see any tiger at all.Thus,they felt easy and sang songs together.When Mohan looked behind,he suddenly saw a big tiger following them.“A tiger!A tiger!” he shouted.Ramesh rushed to a tree and climbed up quickly,while shouting at his friends,“Hurry to climb the tree!”
At this time,the tiger rushed them.Unfortunately,Mahesh was praying to God and had no time to climb the tree.As a result,the other three friends escaped except Mahesh.Seeing the tiger carrying Mahesh away,they jumped down from the tree to save him,but they were so late that they couldn’t catch up with the tiger.The three of the four friends had to go back to the village.In a word,God helps those who help themselves,and they know its meaning now.
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